Hello,
Unfortunately, I will be REJECTING this map submission. Here is my input:
Theme: The theme is original as I don't believe we have any Vortex themed maps - at least none that resemble your build. However, we do have multiple weather/storm themed maps, so if that's what you're going for here then it's not original.
Build: The build is basically pixel art, which is no longer acceptable for maps on Manacube. Try to make your build 3D and well-detailed for future submissions.
Parkour: The parkour was the proper length and difficulty to fit an EASY map - however, a lot of the parkour was floating and was repetitive. Try to make your parkour attached to the main build of your map, as well as making your jumps a wide variety of blocks (such as anvils, vines, heads, flower pots, lily pads, etc.) to make your parkour fun to play.
I hope to see more map submission from you in the future, and have a great day!