Rejected Map Submission

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Username: Itzchickenfan
Map Name: Spongey
Plot ID: 126;-121
Difficulty: Hard or Expert
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Hi! I have 3 things for you.
1) there is no theme
2) You should have a build that the parkour goes around, so for example, a giant sponge might work; not a block of sponge, but a sponge that looks like a real life one.
3) all of the parkour is floating and made of just blocks. Try to vary your parkour ON a build next time. https://manacube.com/threads/what-is-block-variation.64601/
 

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Hello Itzchickenfan,

I regret to inform you that your map is REJECTED.

There really isn't a THEME to your map. Make sure you create a map around a base theme. The theme could be a character from your favorite video game or a scene from your favorite movie.

The BUILD of your map is a problem. There isn't a main build, it is just floating blocks and boxes. Next time try considering creating one main build with lots of depth and detail.

The PARKOUR fits the length and difficulty of a hard map, so good job on that! Your parkour is lacking variance, only things that are incorporated are regular jumps and neos. To add more variance, try adding more jumps with unique blocks like pots, water, heads, vines, etc.

Thank you for taking the time to create a map, I hope to see more submissions from you in the future.
If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me on discord at Elly#5555
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