Rejected Medium Map Submission - MBGTB

[happyheart]

I have made a map of medium difficulty on the Minevast Creative server. It is called MBGTB, which is short for "Marble Blast Gold Throwback." The theme is inspired by the game Marble Blast Gold, from which I adapted one of MBG's maps (Darwin's Dilemma) for Minevast Parkour. There are 72 jumps and 5 checkpoints. The map was created by happyheart, (me) and I also set the warp to the plot, /warp MBG.
Here are some screenshots:

For some reason lots of my screenshots can't be uploaded, since there are "problems" occurring with them, so please just go check out the plot.
Here is a picture of the MBG map I was roughly imitating.

You'll notice it doesn't look very similar; I was using other parts of this map for the parkour, and I was doing it fully from memory at the time.
Also, note that the map is entirely cheat proof. I've blocked all possible shortcuts.

 

[Billybo10000]

This map has been REJECTED!

This is because - The map just feels too confusing. While there's a sense of linearity, the blocks are very different and it can be jarring to look at. Transitions tend to be very tough.

While the jumps were fair and were of medium quality, the map theme itself was rather obscure and it felt like you didn't know what you wanted the map to be. Maybe some revision is needed.

Remember, you can always re-apply.

~ Billy