Hello,
I regret to inform you that your map has been
REJECTED.
The theme of your map is unoriginal as we already have maps based on melons/islands/floating islands etc. Please look at out parkour list
here to get a general idea of the maps we already have.
The build of your map is a has great detail and depth so good job on that! Try to have one main island/build so that you can path your parkour around it and have less floating parkour. This will improve the aesthetic!
The parkour difficulty is inconsistent. Some parts feel like a medium whilst other parts feel like an easy. The parkour ending is set to an easy ending (green wool) so be sure to put the corresponding wool to the difficulty if you'd like it to be a medium. There is some variation; however, it is in clumps which means it's repetitive. You can add more variation such as ice, water, glass panes, daylight sensors, trapdoors, soul sand, etc. so that you can spread out your variation to make the parkour more enjoyable.
We hope to see more maps from you in the future!
Have a good day/night
-Hayley