Rejected Military Airplane - Medium

thejusticeboy · May 31, 2020

User: Deblobby
Map: Military Airplane
Warp: /plot v deblobby 2
Difficulty: Medium
Jumps: About 59

IPattyI · Jun 5, 2020

Hey Deblobby,

It pains me to have to tell you that I will be REJECTING your map.

Theme: Although we do have a map on the server called "Airplane", I believe that the similarity in theme is excusable due to your different approach to the theme and build.
Build: The build is okay. The main issues I have with it are the lack of proper parkour integration and detailing. The parkour is just kinda floating all over the place and hurting the attractiveness of the build. And, you could work on adding some finer details to the build.
Parkour: The PK's length and difficulty could definitely be modified to be suited better for the medium difficulty. I'd recommend shortening the number of jumps by a bit and nerfing a couple of tricky jumps. The biggest issue I had with the parkour was the repetitiveness of it. There was an overabundance of ladder/snow jumps. You have to use a variety of jumps/blocks so that it's enjoyable to play.

I hope you take these criticisms into consideration when submitting maps in the future, good luck!