Rejected Mob Parkour // Insane

[Kiri]

Username: TRIGGRDFeminist
The # of your Plot / or warp name to it: /warp MobParkour
Difficulty (Easy, Medium, Hard, Expert, Insane): Insane
Number of jumps (Optional): 89

Note: This isn't my parkour. This is Rexy's//triggrdfeminist's parkour.
I am just posting this for him

 

[gnunou]

I looked over the map, and I liked the idea, but the builds seemed quite simple and unconnected. They builds themselves were well done, and the pk itself was good, but it just seemed a bit ... incomplete is the best way I can describe it. I think if there was more fluidity throughout the entire build, I might like it a bit more, but that's just me. I do think it is well done, but I'm not sure if it should go on the server. I'm sorry, I'm just trying to give constructive criticism. I wish Rexy the best of luck on their build being accepted! :p

 

[Miku]

I really enyoyd this Parkour but I am still not comfortable to say it is perfect. Like Gnunou said it is uncompleted. You can fix it tho. But I have to say Pixel Art parkour are too repetitive. There are too many. They also did a thread talking about Pixel arts. So im not sure if this will be added. Even tho the pixel art looks good and it is very nice. I wish you the best of luck so it gets accepted! Sorry if you find this mean, sorry. I am just trying to give my opinion. It is ok if you get mad at me.

 

[Kiri]

I really enyoyd this Parkour but I am still not comfortable to say it is perfect. Like Gnunou said it is uncompleted. You can fix it tho. But I have to say Pixel Art parkour are too repetitive. There are too many. They also did a thread talking about Pixel arts. So im not sure if this will be added. Even tho the pixel art looks good and it is very nice. I wish you the best of luck so it gets accepted! Sorry if you find this mean, sorry. I am just trying to give my opinion. It is ok if you get mad at me.

Umm there is no pixel art...
[DOUBLEPOST=1483844429][/DOUBLEPOST]What map are you Looking at

 

[gnunou]

Umm there is no pixel art...

I think she was meaning the designs of the characters looked a bit like pixel art.

 

[Kiri]

How do they look like pixel art? They are full mob structures.

 

[gnunou]

I don't think they look like pixel art, I was just saying how that was maybe what she meant.

 

[Miku]

Ok, Now I am confused. I asked many people in game and they said it isnt. Just stop it with me.

 

[Shron]

Hey JJ/Rexy,
I am going to reject this course, since we already got a course with skeletons, zombies, creepers etc. and the parkour is also not really fun to play. Thanks for submitting this course and good luck with future courses!

Shron