Rejected Money: Updated - Medium

[Essoke]

I submitted another map called money but it got rejected. Here is an updated version.
Username: Essoke
Builders: Essoke, EdvardW, MegaGamer2010
Map Name: Money

Warp: /plot visit Essoke 1
The difficulty is Medium.
There are 3 hidden Easter Eggs in the map. Try and find them.
If any of you have feedback please tell me

 

[Cogsworth]

-0.5 There are a lot of floating jumps, and it kinda makes the map look messy. Although the theme is original! Good luck!

 

[00X00]

Very cool looking, Hopefully it doesn't get rejected

 

[sapqhire]

Hello Essoke,

Unfortunately I will be Rejecting your map.
The theme is original, the build has improved, but it isn't very attractive. It is a bit more 3d, but it does look a bit like floating islands.
The parkour is very repetitive, as it's made up of almost all single block jumps. In the future, I would recommend experimenting with a larger variety of blocks and items when building jumps, it will make your map overall more enjoyable to complete.
All of the parkour is floating. Try to implement the jumps more within the build, floating jumps can make the build look messy, so try to avoid having large numbers of these in your maps.
The length is good for a medium map, and the difficulty is good for an easy map.

Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.