Hey, you asked for some advice on the map.
However, I tended to avoid most insane maps because of one rather large flaw. Your map doesn't make 100% use of the set-piece, the Monuments, instead adding random Floating Parkour that makes no sense at all with the theme. You sort of chuck Neo jumps, iron bars and stuff around and it doesn't make good use of the set.
So sadly I can't really judge the map, based on it being so disjointed.