Rejected Mountainy Island

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Mountainy Island
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Island and mountain themes are taken, try to come up with an original theme next time
 

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yeah theres an unoriginal theme, build is sorta basic, its alright tho, and the pk isn't varied. sry its a -1 from me
 

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Hello Superflyjason,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme of your map is unoriginal, as we already have maps based around mountain (IceMountain). Before creating a parkour please make sure to check out this template here to see all the maps accepted on the server!
The build of your map is good. There is good detailing and texture on the island itself; however, there could be more texture in and on the mountain itself. Be careful with parkour pathing and the build itself as there are a few skips up the mountain.
The parkour fits the length and difficulty of a easy map, so good job on that! The only jump that would need to be nerfed is the last cobble wall jump. Your parkour is lacking variance, only things that are incorporated are regular jumps, and and fences. To add more variance, try adding more jumps with unique blocks like pots, water, heads, vines, etc.[Hayley]

Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
 
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