Rejected MuffinPK (easy)

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User: Agenthairball
Map name: MuffinPK
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ID: 57:79
Difficulty: Easy
69 jumps 5 checkpoints, if including the part where you skip the neo its 76 jumps.
 

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Hello! I'm here to give you a few tips on your map. First off, the theme. The theme muffin has already been used. Before making a map, make sure to check the list of maps to make sure your idea hasn't been taken. Secondly, the build. When creating a map, there should be one build, and all the parkour should be built off of that one big build. Your map has many different builds making it look a bit messy. Another thing is you used pixel art on some of them which is no longer allowed in maps. Lastly, the parkour. Its mainly floating so it looks messy. Make sure to have all your parkour attached to one build. Your blocks have no variation. Spice it up a little bit using more than one block. For example lily pads, or slime blocks. You can see what this looks like in more recent maps. Another thing is the amount of jumps. 69 jumps is way too many for an easy map. Try to have less jumps while making an easy map. You should have between 25-40. Best of luck to you!
 
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Hello! I'm here to give you a few tips on your map. First off, the theme. The theme muffin has already been used. Before making a map, make sure to check the list of maps to make sure your idea hasn't been taken. Secondly, the build. When creating a map, there should be one build, and all the parkour should be built off of that one big build. Your map has many different builds making it look a bit messy. Another thing is you used pixel art on some of them which is no longer allowed in maps. Lastly, the parkour. Its mainly floating so it looks messy. Make sure to have all your parkour attached to one build. Your blocks have no variation. Spice it up a little bit using more than one block. For example lily pads, or slime blocks. You can see what this looks like in more recent maps. Another thing is the amount of jumps. 69 jumps is way too many for an easy map. Try to have less jumps while making an easy map. You should have between 25-40. Best of luck to you!
Thank you for your info!
 

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Hello! I'm here to give you a few tips on your map. First off, the theme. The theme muffin has already been used. Before making a map, make sure to check the list of maps to make sure your idea hasn't been taken. Secondly, the build. When creating a map, there should be one build, and all the parkour should be built off of that one big build. Your map has many different builds making it look a bit messy. Another thing is you used pixel art on some of them which is no longer allowed in maps. Lastly, the parkour. Its mainly floating so it looks messy. Make sure to have all your parkour attached to one build. Your blocks have no variation. Spice it up a little bit using more than one block. For example lily pads, or slime blocks. You can see what this looks like in more recent maps. Another thing is the amount of jumps. 69 jumps is way too many for an easy map. Try to have less jumps while making an easy map. You should have between 25-40. Best of luck to you!
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Hello Agenthairball,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is unoriginal, as we already have a map with the same theme (Muffin.) Before creating a map, make sure that your theme has not already been done before by going here.
The build is somewhat accurate to what you were going for; it does look a bit messy as mentioned above, and you should also try to refrain from pixel art, as it seems to be one of the main focuses here.
The parkour is very repetitive throughout, so please make sure that you use other types of jumps throughout your entire map! This may include; water, lava, vines, heads, flower pots, and many other different types of jumps depending on your theme/build. The parkour is a bit long for the difficulty; try to keep it around 20-40 for an easy map.

Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
 
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