Rejected My Parkour Map

[XanderJames]

Difficulty: Medium Difficulty.
I built this course myself I did not have anyone else helping me build this course
The username of the plot is XanderJames
Map Name: (Bowser's Big Bean Burrito)
ID For Map: -11;123
Number of Jumps: 44
Here are some screenshots of the map

 

[Acrellux]

Please edit your format, look at dacons thread on the top of Map Submissions and read it

 

[49ersDude]

lol this is funny and cool.

 

[k_rissy]

Hello XanderJames,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme of your map is original, since there isn't a map of Mario Series' Bowser on the server yet (And especially not of one holding a burrito) even if there are many Mario maps already. Good work on coming up with something new and unique!
The build of your map is good, but there are some things you could improve on. Bowser is very recognizable in the map, and cartoony like he should be, good work on that! However the main floor and the chair are quite bland looking, and could use some extra detail!
The parkour of your map is the main concern. The difficulty fit a medium map really well and also had a good length, so good work on that. However, your parkour was very repetitive and boring to play, as almost all of the jumps were regular block jumps. Try to aim for constantly varying gameplay when making a map so it doesn't get repetitive to play! All of your parkour was also floating, which looked very messy from behind the build. Try to have the parkour attached to a main build in the future![Gamers]

Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina