Rejected NatureReserve by Schoolity

[Schoolity]

• Username: Schoolity
• Map name: NatureReserve
• The # of your Plot / or warp name to it: /plot visit Schoolity 2
• Difficulty: Easy
• Number of jumps: About 35

 

[A1TheGamer]

I love how much you didn't leave spots without detail, it really shows you put a lot of dedication into your map and you didn't rush it. Good job! I would really love to see this accepted

 

[Nathanpls]

hi Schoolity, I like your map, it's simple and visually pleasing. I wish though that you use more block variation because to me it felt very repetitive.
You could read this for some tips:
https://manacube.com/threads/what-is-block-variation.64601/

Also remember I'm no map jugde so this is just my personal opinion and won't effect if the map is accepted or rejected.

Anyways, have a nice day!

 

[sapqhire]

Hello Schoolity,

Unfortunately, I will be Rejecting your map.
The theme isn't original, as there are many nature themed maps already. I would suggest referring to the document linked in this thread - https://manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/ to make sure your map idea is original. (CTRL + F on windows and command + F on mac to search for themes in that document)
The build is good, it's accurate to the theme and built nicely, I like the details you have added.
The parkour is very repetitive. Try to experiment a bit more with different blocks and items when creating jumps, as well as the way you utilise these, to create more original and enjoyable jumps.
The length and difficulty are good for an easy map.

Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.