Hello _Triangl,
I regret to inform you that your map is being
rejected.
The theme is
not original, as we have many maps centered around celestial bodies such as Neptune (Maps: Planets, Galaxy, Planets (Dropper)). Please make sure you check the map list
here before building!
For your build, it is nice to see you have a central build which your parkour is built around. However, the planet itself is
plain and has one texture. For future maps,
you will require more detail and complexity in your build. Some advice would be to scale up the build so you can add more details. It would be advised to play the latest maps (sort by Newest!) to get a good impression of what the current acceptable standard is. Here's a couple to give you some inspiration of spacey themed builds: LunarTown, SpaceCargo, DeathstarPK, Curiosity
The parkour is fitting around the
right length of 45 jumps for a medium maps. Well done on choosing blocks that blend in well with your build, keep that up. The jumps themselves require more variety and creativity. Try creating variation by using different blocks. A good starting point would be to have a read through this thread.
https://manacube.com/threads/basics-parkour-variance-and-self-constraint.78459/ [Pink]
Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!