Hoi YoloMcSwagDragon,
Sorry to tell you that your map have been rejected.
The theme is pretty original, even if there is already some console maps. The build is pretty good, would just be better with less floating jumps at the start. The parkour however is not good. It's pretty repetitive and a bit confusing because of invisible blocks. I suggest you to use more blocks in your parkour, like ice, fence, soul sand, iron bars..
You can resubmit your map if you want, if you patch all the parkour at least, I will be happy to accept your map !
Thanks for submitting your map, would be really good to see more maps from you !