Rejected Nether Dungeon - Expert

[ieatmud]

Username: ieatmud (Amateur)
Nether Dungeon
Difficulty is Hard or Expert
Made on Map Maker World
Plot Number: 103;-64
Number of Jumps: 65

 

[IPattyI]

Hey ieatmud,

Unfortunately, I will be REJECTING this map submission.

• Theme: As we have an overabundance of nether-related maps currently on our server, this is a very unoriginally themed map submission. I recommend that you look at our list of previously used maps/themes as to prevent such things in the future: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lZKQZMgGev6fXyhZ8nCPkTzNIj0yOjXjUTDvfzKNzl4/edit .
• Build: Personally, I don't think the build is very good. For starters, it's just very unoriginal. It looks like the countless other nether fortress maps we've seen submitted. It doesn't take a new and exciting take on the theme. And, it's not very well-executed either. You have a bunch of messy floating parkour and a plain/empty nether brick cylinder.
• Parkour: The parkour fits the hard difficulty length and difficulty wise. But, it was not very entertaining to do due to the repetitive nature of it. There were just too many fence and ladder jumps, it felt like I was doing the same thing over and over again. Don't be afraid to experiment, try to use a bunch of different blocks/jumps in your parkour to make it as fun as possible.

I hope you take these criticisms into consideration when submitting maps in the future, good luck