Rejected Nether Fortress Adventure - Easy

IlligerofTheWest · Jun 27, 2020

Creator: IlligerofTheWest
Map Name: Nether Fortress Adventure
Difficulty: Easy
Number of Jumps: 12
Plot: 100;74
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IPattyI · Jun 27, 2020

Hey IlligerofTheWest,

Unfortunately, I will be REJECTING this map submission.

Theme: As have a multitude of Nether/Biome-related maps currently on our server, this is a very unoriginal submission. Please make sure that your map is originally themed by checking our previously used themes here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lZKQZMgGev6fXyhZ8nCPkTzNIj0yOjXjUTDvfzKNzl4/edit
Build: In my eyes, effort wasn't put into the build. It barely even looks like a nether fortress. It's just some floating jumps with a nether brick rectangle in the middle. Your build needs to portray your theme accurately so that there's cohesion between the two while also making it attractive. I didn't see that in this build.
Parkour: The parkour is way way way too easy and short for the easy difficulty. We want easies to be a little harder than this and to reach 20-40 jumps. Furthermore, the parkour was incredibly linear as you utilized the same jump (and blocks, most of the time). It was just 1b's and 2b's. There was no variety. You need to be more creative when building parkour so that it's enjoyable to do.

I hope you take these criticisms into consideration when submitting maps in the future, good luck!