Rejected New map(again)

[ImNotRares]

Made a map before wich was a lazy one and was rejected
this map i spent more time on
Name:BoantaRares
Map:Floating Boats
Difficulty: Medium-Hard (cant decide)

 

[IPattyI]

Hey ImNotRares,

Unfortunately, I will be REJECTING this map submission.

• Theme: As we have several boat-related maps currently on our server, this is an unoriginally themed submission. I recommend that you look at our list of previously used maps/themes as to prevent such things: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lZKQZMgGev6fXyhZ8nCPkTzNIj0yOjXjUTDvfzKNzl4/edit .
• Build: In my opinion, the build is not very good. It's just floating boats and parkour. Disregarding the fact it's very unoriginal, it just lacks in so many areas, these being: focus (it doesn't really focus on a single boat, it's just a bunch of them), structuring (it's all floating around and very messy), detailing/shaping (the boat themselves could use more work and the pixel art captain is not good-looking), and parkour integration (a lot of it is floating).
• Parkour: You can't choose between two difficulties. From the beginning, you must've had a difficulty in mind so that you fit its requirements. When you don't, it leads to problems. In this case, the parkour is too easy for the hard difficulty but too long for the medium difficulty. Furthermore, the parkour was incredibly repetitive to do as you didn't utilize a variety of blocks/jumps for it. There were so many ladder and slab jumps that it all felt like a chore.

I hope you take these criticisms into consideration when submitting maps in the future, good luck!