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- Thread starter Angel_Scarz
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Hey! Feedback time!
I could not tell what it was at first, the only thing that told me it was a church was the title and the cross, and even then I was a bit confused. It appears to lack detail in the design phase of it, and a lot of the jumps are floating, sort of taking away from a clean, smooth design. I like the idea, though I think that the map needs to be edited a bit more.
I could not tell what it was at first, the only thing that told me it was a church was the title and the cross, and even then I was a bit confused. It appears to lack detail in the design phase of it, and a lot of the jumps are floating, sort of taking away from a clean, smooth design. I like the idea, though I think that the map needs to be edited a bit more.
Hello dear parkourist! My name is Tenshi and Im going to leave you some tips and comments about your parkour.
I will also state wiether or not I think it should be accepted, rejected, or reviewed.
Firstly, Theme.
I feel that this theme is unclear. The only part that looks like a church is the Cross.
Secondly, Parkour.
View this thread here for help with jumps: http://www.minecraftforum.net/forum...tive-mode/369499-parkour-creation-tips-tricks
Thirdly, Rank.
This parkour would be ranked expert because of some of the jumps, Some are harder than a hard map but not too crazy to be Insane.
And Lastly, My comment.
This parkour should or should not be denied.
Reasons Why:
- The parkour lacks detail in "church"
- The jumps can be skipped with /speed
- Some of the build isnt complete
Thank you for submitting a parkour, Remember that this is not a final decision.
Thank you for your time. If this parkour is accepted/rejected, Remember that you can always submit another parkour, at another time.
~Tenshi
I will also state wiether or not I think it should be accepted, rejected, or reviewed.
Firstly, Theme.
I feel that this theme is unclear. The only part that looks like a church is the Cross.
Secondly, Parkour.
View this thread here for help with jumps: http://www.minecraftforum.net/forum...tive-mode/369499-parkour-creation-tips-tricks
Thirdly, Rank.
This parkour would be ranked expert because of some of the jumps, Some are harder than a hard map but not too crazy to be Insane.
And Lastly, My comment.
This parkour should or should not be denied.
Reasons Why:
- The parkour lacks detail in "church"
- The jumps can be skipped with /speed
- Some of the build isnt complete
Thank you for submitting a parkour, Remember that this is not a final decision.
Thank you for your time. If this parkour is accepted/rejected, Remember that you can always submit another parkour, at another time.
~Tenshi
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