Hii! I can see that this map is better than the previous map you made. The amount of jumps now fit the hard difficulty. Unfortunally, the theme isn't orginal again. As there not really is a theme lol. Try to really make a build, and make the course inside or around the build. Don't just make floating jumps. There is an example in the attachments (2nd picture). This is one of my maps, and as you can see, it's not just floating jumps. Try to do this with your maps too! Also, your course isn't varied, as you only used full minecraft blocks! Try to use different blocks such as vines, water, ladders, iron bars, etc, to make the course more fun! You can see some blocks you could use in the attachments (If you want to visit the plot, type /plot v Sillllllllllllll, 14 L's). I will be giving this map a -1. :(
Good luck with making your future maps! -Guy with a lot of L's