This map has been rejected.
Reasons for this include:
The theme and design has been used in a multitude of other maps on the server already. We have plenty of towers made of obsidian and other various items already.
The parkour is confusing and upon getting inside the tower, there is seemingly no way to proceed. As such, we cannot tell where to go which means new players will have the same issue.
The ceiling is made entirely of glowstone with no other block variation. You had a nice theme with the floors and the sides of the rather square tower (More like a building), but the ceiling just killed any interest in the map and made the build look basic.
There is no need for a story in those first few blocks. It's an obsidian nether tower. Stories should only be integrated into parkours created with a specific tale or story in mind.
~ Billy