Rejected On the planets 1 - Hard

[DanielJung2007]

Ok, this is my second map called "on the planats", last time I did not know that you have to get a theme going because I am still kinda new. I don't know if the Map is set normal (Survival, etc.). I had to put Berriers in Mercury and Venus and on the Rocket ship because there would be some cheating if I don't do that. So please hold a berrier Block while testing this Map. I do not know if you can make the time to nicht because it would match the theme. There is a 1 in the name of the Map because not all the planats are in there Only the Sun, Mercury and Venus, there is not a lot place so I could not put all the Plants in so if this is accepted there might be a second part. Now the facts:

I built the map
Map Name: on the Planets 1
I think you have to do /plot visit DanielJung2007 2
Difficulty: Hard
Number of Jumps: 69 (really not a joke)

 

[Elly_x]

Hello DanielJung2007,

I regret to inform you that your map is REJECTED.

The THEME of your map is unoriginal, as we already have maps based around space (Planets, Galaxy, SpaceShip). Before creating a parkour please make sure to check out this template here to see all the maps accepted on the server!

The BUILD of your map is a problem. The build is accurate for what you are going for but are very small and lacking lots of detail. I recommend adding extra items to further create a detailed map.

The PARKOUR fits the length of a hard map, so good job on that! The parkour is to easy for a hard map through. Your parkour is lacking variance, only things that are incorporated are regular jumps and slimes. To add more variance, try adding more jumps with unique blocks like pots, water, heads, vines, etc.

Thank you for taking the time to create a map, I hope to see more submissions from you in the future.
If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me on discord at Elly#5555
Elly