Rejected Oreo Parkour - Hard Map

[Shefts]

Oreo Parkour
Builder: Shefts
Map name: Oreo Parkour
Pictures: https://prnt.sc/1004vh3
https://prnt.sc/1004vka
/plot v shefts
Difficulty: Hard
Jumps: 46
(more jumps would just be used to get into the 65-85 range, but would have no significant purpose)​

 

[Acrellux]

Most of the parkour looks like it's floating which isn't accepted on ManaCube anymore :(, you can fix that by putting more of the parkour on the build!

 

[Shefts]

Most of the parkour looks like it's floating which isn't accepted on ManaCube anymore :(, you can fix that by putting more of the parkour on the build!

Is it enough if i put a giant Oreo under the first part of the map, and have enough floating Oreos to land on if you fail the later ones?

 

[Acrellux]

Is it enough if i put a giant Oreo under the first part of the map, and have enough floating Oreos to land on if you fail the later ones?

I can't exactly imagine that in my brain but sure I guess

 

[k_rissy]

Hello Shefts,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is original, well done.
The build is somewhat accurate to what you were going for; however, it is quite messy, so try having less structures and group them closer together.
The parkour is repetitive throughout, so be sure to incorporate different jump styles throughout your entire map. The parkour is also quite confusing, so try to have a more direct path throughout. The length of the parkour is a bit short, and the jumps are a bit easy.

Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!