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Loading Status...Rejected Ouroboros - Hard
- Thread starter PykeRhyno
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Hello PykeRhyno,
Unfortunately, I will be Rejecting your map.
The theme is original, the build isn't bad, but it is quite messy, and can be difficult to tell exactly what it is.
The parkour is quite repetitive. You used a lot of normal blocks, ladders, ice and slime. I would recommend experimenting with a larger variety of blocks and items when building jumps. This will make your map overall more enjoyable to complete.
You also did group a lot of your jumps. What I mean by this, is that you would have a sequence of only ice jumps, then a sequence of only normal blocks etc. Try to mix up your jumps a bit more, maps can get a bit boring when jumps are this repetitive.
This map is very confusing. There are a lot of sections where it is very unclear on where you need to jump to. I would suggest trying to make less confusing jumps, and including signs or something like a different coloured carpet giving clearer indication on where to go.
Try to avoid using an excessive number of barriers, and try to place something like item frames on them when you do need them. Having a lot of barriers, especially when their locations are unclear, can make the map more confusing as well.
The length and difficulty are good for a hard map.
Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.
- Madi & Luci
Unfortunately, I will be Rejecting your map.
The theme is original, the build isn't bad, but it is quite messy, and can be difficult to tell exactly what it is.
The parkour is quite repetitive. You used a lot of normal blocks, ladders, ice and slime. I would recommend experimenting with a larger variety of blocks and items when building jumps. This will make your map overall more enjoyable to complete.
You also did group a lot of your jumps. What I mean by this, is that you would have a sequence of only ice jumps, then a sequence of only normal blocks etc. Try to mix up your jumps a bit more, maps can get a bit boring when jumps are this repetitive.
This map is very confusing. There are a lot of sections where it is very unclear on where you need to jump to. I would suggest trying to make less confusing jumps, and including signs or something like a different coloured carpet giving clearer indication on where to go.
Try to avoid using an excessive number of barriers, and try to place something like item frames on them when you do need them. Having a lot of barriers, especially when their locations are unclear, can make the map more confusing as well.
The length and difficulty are good for a hard map.
Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.
- Madi & Luci
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