Rejected Ouroboros - Hard

[PykeRhyno]

(Pronounced Ore-Oh-Bore-Ose)
Theme: Ouroboros Is A Snake/Dragon Swallowing Its Own Tail. The Symbol Of Infinity/Eternity
Hard | 64 Jumps | 4 Checkpoints | Made By PykeRhyno | /plot v PykeRhyno 2
I have changed the gameplay and the decorations a lot, from filling it in with air deco to using more block variety. It went from looking like a Minecraft build to a colorful painting.

 

[sapqhire]

Hello PykeRhyno,

Unfortunately, I will be Rejecting your map.
The theme is original, but the build isn't very good. I understand that you added more decoration and colour to the build, but it does make it look quite messy, and can be difficult to tell exactly what it's meant to be.
The parkour has improved, as you added more variety in the style of jumps you built, which is good.
You implemented the jumps into the build well, but it still looks a bit messy and confusing because the build itself is quite crowded.
The length and difficulty are good for a hard map.

Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.