Rejected Over and under - Re-submission (Medium)

[Dovarkisconfused]

Name: Over and Under
Creators: Dovarkisconfused
Plot: /plot v Dovarkisconfused 2
Difficulty: Medium
Jumps: 53

This is my re-submission of my map that was rejected. After my rejection, I took the advice I was given, and also extended the map. I hope you consider accepting my re-submission!
- Dovark
P.S. There are walls at the last cloud in the cloud section. I couldn't use the /barrier command for some reason, so please replace the walls with barrier blocks. Thanks!

 

[k_rissy]

Hello Dovarkisconfused,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is the same as your previous submission.
The build is still quite spread out, and it still looks a bit messy. There are a few more details, but the structures do still look plain.
The parkour is still a bit repetitive throughout, so make sure your jumps are varied throughout your entire map! There are also quite a few floating jumps (jumps that aren't attached to the build) which makes it look messy. The length of this course is good for the medium difficulty, but the jumps are a bit too easy.

Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina