Rejected Over and under

[Dovarkisconfused]

Name: Over and Under
Creators: Dovarkisconfused
Plot: /plot v Dovarkisconfused 2
Difficulty: Easy
Jumps: 33

This is my first map so I won't be surprised if i get rejected. My map is very simple and easy and is great for new parkour players! I'm not that much of a builder so there is not much detail put in to this map. I look forward to seeing comments for improvement and other constructive critsism!

-Dovark

 

[k_rissy]

Hello Dovarkisconfused,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is a bit confusing; I guess it could be arguably unoriginal.
The build is a bit plain, so try adding some more details throughout! The structures are also spread out quite a bit, so try grouping them closer together!
The parkour is quite repetitive throughout with grass and ladders, so try to incorporate different jump styles throughout your entire map! This may include; fences, lava, vines, cactus, flower pots, and many more different types of jumps depending on your theme! The parkour is also floating throughout (meaning it isn't attached to the main build) which can make it appear messy. The length of this course and difficulty of the jumps do fit the easy difficulty quite nicely!

Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina