Rejected Overcast Library

[iMonkey]

Overcast Library -Difficulty Hard-
8 Checkpoints
85+ Jumps
/plot v iMonkey

 

[iMonkey]

I have modified it so the floor is into the void :):)

 

[LyZeR__]

I enjoyed doing the parkour on it, but the build itself is not good. Its just a box with logs planks and bookshelves. If you made the build resemble more of a library the course would be better.

 

[iMonkey]

I enjoyed doing the parkour on it, but the build itself is not good. Its just a box with logs planks and bookshelves. If you made the build resemble more of a library the course would be better.

Okay thanks alot for the feedback :) <3

 

[Shinxray]

Hoi iMonkey,
Sorry to tell you that your map have been rejected.
The theme is a bit original, but not totally original since there is already a Library map (but pretty different to your's (Library)), the build is not good, it's not really attractive and pretty plain (We can easily see the use of worldedit for the wall), avoid overusing worldedit and try to add more decoration Inside the build. The parkour could be better, it's varied, but maybe a bit repetitive (There is a lot of "Stairs" jump in your map).

Thanks for submitting your map, wold be really good to see more maps from you !