Hoi ILeftTheGame_,
Sorry to tell you that your map have been rejected.
The theme is really good and original. The build however is not good, it's really messy and unattractive because there is a lot of random floating islands. The parkour is not good too, way too long for an expert, and really repetitive, try to add some ice, slimes, iron bars… in your maps.
Thanks for submitting your map, would be really good to see more maps from you !