Rejected Papyrus I Difficulty : Expert

[AlgaOnTheBeat]

Map info:

Name: Papyrus
Difficulty: Expert
Plot: /plot v AlgaOnTheBeat
Jumps: 95
Checkpoints: 7
Creator : AlgaOnTheBeat (used a youtube video of Wapitika for the pixel art, thanks :D)
Proof of him agreeing to let me use his video:

http://imgur.com/a/ihKSjQh

(sorry it's in french)
Some photos :

 

[Udun]

you must have totally original builds on this server, and even though you have the other persons permission, it isn't allowed. also this is pixel art which is not accepted. sorry, -1

 

[AlgaOnTheBeat]

I don't understand why pixel art is not allowed since I've seen some of them already like the luigi parkour. That's kinda sad as I put a lot of work in this :(

 

[Elly_x]

Hello AlgaOnTheBeat,

I regret to inform you that your map is REJECTED.

The THEME of your map is original, so good job on that!

The BUILD of your map is a problem. The map is entirely made up of pixel art and floating parkour, which is no longer accepted on ManaCube. Next time try considering creating one large main build with lots of depth and detail. It is also a copied build, which we also don't allow. I also recommend looking at some newly accepted maps to see what we really want on ManaCube!

The PARKOUR fits the length of a expert map, so good job on that! The difficulty was too easy through. Your parkour is lacking variance, only things that are incorporated are regular jumps, and ice. Your parkour has some variance, but most of it is in clumps causing it to still be repetitive, especially with ladders. To add more variance, try adding more jumps with unique blocks like pots, water, heads, vines, etc.

Thank you for taking the time to create a map, I hope to see more submissions from you in the future.
If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me on discord at Elly#5555
Elly