Rejected Parkour Course - "Hangman" - Hard

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JinxRaider23

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Parkour name: Hangman
Plot warp: /plot h JinxRaider23 8
Course difficulty: Hard
Checkpoints: 3
Time taken to build: 30 Minutes
Builders: JinxRaider23, SaltyMel (Formally known as ShatteredHeart)
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Txilsy

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Heyaa Jinx (& Mel),

The course has a nice theme. But, the build itself.
- First-off, there isn't much variety in colour, if I'm being honest. This way the build look less nice to look at, it's kind of boring. For example, you could use different kinds of wooden planks, for shading etc.
- Second, the map only has two or three difficult jumps and because of the length, I think more of it like a medium course. Personal preference maybe, but that's what I think.
- Last, 30 minutes? That's pretty quick xD

Good luck anyways!
 

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Hey Jinx,
I am sorry to tell you, but I am going to reject the course.
The build looks way too simple and not attractive. The jumps are also a bit repetitive. Just remember 50% Building and 50% the jumps. You should always keep that in your mind!
Thanks for submitting the course and I hope to see more in the future :D

Shron
 
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