-1 for now..
Hey!
As said above you haven't followed the required format. You have to include who made the map and a tester if there is one, which is probably the most important aspect. Secondly, you need to say what difficulty it is, easy, medium, hard, expert or insane. You also have to add in how many jumps there are. I don't think checkpoints are necessary because I'm pretty sure map judges will look at it and place them in.
Anyways.. I would also make the screen a bit taller. And idk about your laptop but mine has a mouse. So maybe add in a mouse, it would be some nice detail!
As I just mentioned detail, I would add in more details and things where it's just empty. It's a big empty spot which just doesn't look very good!
Good luck in the future!
Sophie