Rejected Parkour Course - "Snake" - Easy

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Parkour name: Snake
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Course difficulty: Easy
Checkpoints: 6
Time taken to build: 2 hours
Creator: JinxRaider23

PS: This may be a Medium course xD [-=+Images Below+=-]
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[DOUBLEPOST=1487103400][/DOUBLEPOST]Hope you guys enjoy, as i have never made an Easy course for parkour (because i usually go for INSANES)! ;)

~Theo // JinxRaider23
 

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Good course and is fun to play on, maybe make it actually look like a snake, I guess if you improve that it might get accepted :)
 

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Thankyou Mel :) <3
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Good course and is fun to play on, maybe make it actually look like a snake, I guess if you improve that it might get accepted :)
Thankyou Hugo, if I were asked to improve it... then how? because improving it would jeopardize the whole course xD
 

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Well then you may have to start again, I don't know, your choice, your course. My opinion, tbh it doesn't really look like a snake, but the parkour is good. If you were to improve it, I'd suggest the snake to be better and stand out more. Lol
 

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Well then you may have to start again, I don't know, your choice, your course. My opinion, tbh it doesn't really look like a snake, but the parkour is good. If you were to improve it, I'd suggest the snake to be better and stand out more. Lol
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Sorry but I will be rejecting this parkour. The problem is not the way the parkour works. It's more so the detail in the build. It's a cool concept but it's been done better on other courses. For example Cobra. Thanks for submitting. I hope to see more in the future.
 
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