Rejected Parkour Course - "The Secrets Of The Golden Tree" - INSANE

[JinxRaider23]

• Parkour Name: The Secrets Of The Golden Tree
• Plot warp: /plot h JinxRaider23 3
• Course Difficulty: INSANE
• Number of jumps: 109 (Approx)
• Builders: JinxRaider23 , PikachuGamer_

 

[Peculiarly]

Is there any testers?

 

[JinxRaider23]

yes, all of the jumps are possible... me and PikachuGamer_ have tested them all xD is that what you mean?

 

[JinxRaider23]

or do you mean a particular person who has to come and test my parkour?? :?
[DOUBLEPOST=1485122590,1485122083][/DOUBLEPOST]ow I gtg, cya tomozz, at 4 o clock GBT time, it is 10 o clock at night rn, and i got school tomoz
lmao cya

 

[JinxRaider23]

Hi, im back from school...

Just wondering but has any staff member gone and checked out my course yet?! :?

Thanks if you have

~Theo

 

[Shron]

Theo please be patient. Staff are busy and will most likely review it during their free time (Weekend).

Shron

 

[Aloro]

Hey, Ive taken some time to attempt and have a look at this parkour. I do like the theme you decided to go to, but I also think you could add more detail. In my personal opinion the wall surrounding the golden tree, is just a bit boring and makes me want to stop and go to a different parkour.
To improve add more detail to the wall surrounding the tree, and try make the tree more 'tree like' instead of world edited spheres stacked upwards.

-Aloro

 

[JinxRaider23]

ok thanks xD
[DOUBLEPOST=1485193974][/DOUBLEPOST]and soz Shron :-:

 

[JinxRaider23]

ok I took a bit of your advice Aloro and decided to add some gold ore to the stonebrick walls

 

[Shron]

Hey JinxRaider23,
I am sorry to tell you, but I am going to reject this course. It does not look too attractive and the jumps are repetitive and not too much fun to play.
If you need Inspiration, check BryceBAM's, AliAliAli's or Couchism's courses! Thanks for submitting and I hope to see more in the future!

Shron