Rejected parkour (idk what difficulti)

[Zodzu]

Nick:Osuer
name:levels

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I'm pretty sure that this will be rejected, and here's why.

Theme: there are already a lot of simple, color-based maps, so it isn't original.
Difficulty: the difficulty is pretty easy, but it is very long (well over 40 jumps)
Composition: It's kinda all over the place, and I don't think that that will be agreeable with a map mod.
Fun: it was really fun to do, just doesn't really fall in the guidelines.

going forward, read this:
https://manacube.wiki/parkour/making-maps/parkour-maps

and keep these things in mind.

 

[IPattyI]

Hey Osuer,

Unfortunately, I will be REJECTING this map submission.

• Theme & Build: There's no theme or build present on this map. Parkour for the sake of parkour isn't a worthwhile theme or an actual build. You have to come up with a legitimate original theme and then portray it through a proper build. Solely parkour jumps will never be an actual build. They're meant to complement the build and act as an enjoyable aspect of it.
• Parkour: The parkour has a lot of issues. The first of these being that it just doesn't fit in any difficulty due to the way you made it. You've created leveled parkour, where each level is of increasing difficulty. This spawns what we call a lack of difficulty uniformity across the parkour. It just doesn't work for any difficulty. You need to choose one and then work around it. Furthermore, I found the parkour to be very boring to do as you used the same block for almost all of it (wool) and the beginning was really just the same type of straightforward jumps. You need to be more organized and creative.

I hope you take these criticisms into consideration when submitting maps in the future, good luck!