Rejected Parkour Judgement (Labyrinth)

[JakeBE]

Hello!

I made a parkour on the Map Maker World.
It's called Labyrinth.
It has 45 jumps.
It has 3 checkpoints.
It's made by: JaJaJake.
It's a medium, I think.
It has no helper
Screenshots:

 

[MoneyMiser]

Hello Champ! I'd like to say that this map is very creative and the name Labyrinth ties in well with this map but I do find a few errors. I think if this is a medium map more jumps are needed but the jump length seems decent for a medium map, difficult but at the same time easy. I also find that this map is really separated in some areas, I see wood in one area and in another I see leaves, you should add more detail and find a way for the map to come together instead of having things in separate areas. I don't think this is a bad map, I think it could be fun with these changes added. I will rate this +0 but I am sure that if you fix some things this will be a great map. I hope to see it in the near future. Good luck! :)

 

[peachay]

Hi there,
First of all, the theme you have chosen is original, but I feel like you have not executed it well, as the overall map is unattractive, and I can tell you have not put much effort into this. Also, you have had helpers on this map, as on the side bar it states Helpers: 2, so please change that in your submission. Moreover, as I have tested this map, I believe it is too hard for a medium, and there are far too many barriers, but I will say that I did enjoy doing the parkour. -1

Good luck,
Allie

 

[JakeBE]

Hi there,
First of all, the theme you have chosen is original, but I feel like you have not executed it well, as the overall map is unattractive, and I can tell you have not put much effort into this. Also, you have had helpers on this map, as on the side bar it states Helpers: 2, so please change that in your submission. Moreover, as I have tested this map, I believe it is too hard for a medium, and there are far too many barriers, but I will say that I did enjoy doing the parkour. -1

Good luck,
Allie

The helpers were: Shinxray and iSatOnaPunguin, both mods, cause I had some problems, and I put much time in it.
But still thanks for the reply.

 

[ThePKFish]

Hello JaJaJake,

I am sorry to inform you that this course is being rejected. The overall build isn't very attractive. I also couldn't tell the theme of Labyrinth just by looking at the course. There is not much detail in the build. The parkour on this course isn't very interesting. It can get repetitive in repeated areas throughout the course and it doesn't have much variation in jump and block type. Some of the jumps on this course are a bit much for a medium as well, as peachay said above. Lastly, there are quite a few unnecessary barriers. When making a parkour map, try your best to limit your barrier usage to the bare minimum. Overall, the build isn't very attractive, you can't really tell the theme, and the parkour isn't very interesting, it's repetitive, it's a bit too hard in some areas, and there's quite a few barriers that aren't necessary. However, you said that you did put time into making this. Any time spent towards ManaCube is appreciated :)

Thank you for submitting this course! I hope to see more from you in the future! :)
If you have any questions, you can PM me on here, in game, or on discord

-Ashley (ThePKFish, fishy1980)