Rejected Parkour Map Submission

[Lightning_]

Name: Under Land to Over Land

Jumps:34

Difficulty:Easy

Checkpoints:3

Where: On Creative server - /plot visit Lightning_
Parkour By: Lightning_ and DerpySniper

Pictures of Parkour

 

[SpookyMaddy]

Hello,
This is a nice parkour but a confusing theme? Nether To Overworld
I'm not saying it's bad but it could use some improvement
Maybe add a few more jumps? and build a ghast for the Nether and a Wolf for the Overworld?

Im going to leave a few of my friends @Nixi and @Billybo10000 to review your map

Good Luck!!

 

[Tenshi]

Im going to leave a few of my friends @Nixi and @Billybo10000 to review your map

People stopped tagging people that didnt want to be tagged a while ago. :/

 

[SpookyMaddy]

People stopped tagging people that didnt want to be tagged a while ago. :/

Sorry Didn't know ;-; :P

 

[Lightning_]

Ok thank you Panda for taking your time to review this parkour, it is my first parkour and probably not going to be my best.

 

[Lightning_]

Guys! I took Panda's suggestion and I added a couple more jumps and I added a wither statue and a wolf statue

 

[Tenshi]

Guys! I took Panda's suggestion and I added a couple more jumps and I added a wither statue and a wolf statue

Edit the screens please

 

[Lightning_]

Edit the screens please

Ok, I changed the pictures, hope you like it!

 

[Tenshi]

Thanks haha. Ill review today.

 

[Nixi]

First off I find one problem in the screenshots, the starting place's floor seems to be inside of the ground, what makes the parkour extremely hard to copy-paste to parkour server.
Also the nether--->overworld theme has been used many times before but I don't personally care if the theme is overused, the parkour itself has to just be better than in not used parkours! =)

 

[Angel_Scarz]

PIxel art Copy Wither From tutorial and wolf LINKS:

<- For Wolf For Wither ->

I think it should get Rejected Cuz its from a tutorial also the theme is unclear 2 random Mobs..

 

[Nick_]

looks good ill vote for it :p

 

[Tenshi]

PIxel art Copy Wither From tutorial and wolf LINKS:

<- For Wolf For Wither ->

I think it should get Rejected Cuz its from a tutorial also the theme is unclear 2 random Mobs..

Not reviewing. Tutorial Builds are not allowed.

 

[Lightning_]

Ok ;( this was my first parkour, and I did not know all the rules, and that is my fault. Thank you for reviewing this and letting me know.

 

[Lightning_]

Sans the Skeleton, is there a website that shows all the rules for making a parkour on MineVast?
If so, could you please send me the link.

 

[Angel_Scarz]

There is no thing that says the Tutorial rule drakey just annouced it but its not your fault i agree you did not know

 

[gogre]

Rejected - I could not find the parkour