Rejected Parkour park - medium

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I’m sorry to say that this map Idea has been used before. Look at shinxray’s “parkour list with themes” to help you find original map concepts.
 

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Hello KP77YT,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
You do not have a theme to your map. The name of your map is unclear as it is lacking a build that shows off the theme.
The build of your map is a problem. All of your parkour is floating which isn't allowed. it makes the map look messy. Add a main build to your map so you can path the parkour around the main build. In addition, with a clear build, it will make the theme clear as right now, the theme is unclear.
The parkour fits the length and difficulty of a medium map, so good job on that! Your parkour is lacking variance, only things that are incorporated are regular jumps, and ladders. To add more variance, try adding more jumps with unique blocks like pots, water, heads, vines, etc. Try to use less neos as this makes the parkour repetitive.[Hayley]

Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
 
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