Rejected Parkour School - Medium map

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Asd__

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Built by: Asd__
Map name: Parkour School
Difficulty: Medium: 65 jumps and 6 checkpoints
Plot ID: 49:26

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Sadly, this theme is pretty generic and something similar has been done already. Along with this, the parkour is lacking depth with the majority of structures being 2D. Also, try and vary the jumps a bit more.
 

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Hi there Asd__,

Im sorry to tell ya your map has been rejected.

The THEME is a bit unoriginal, there are quite a few maps that look like this such as bookshelves.

The BUILD is lacking in detail and doesn't have a main build. Please try to make one main build that has parkour around so it eliminates all the floating parkour (Which isn't accepted anymore) !

The PARKOUR is quite repetitive and lacking in varation. It does fit the length of a medium, but it's a little too easy and could use more variation such as chests, slime, water, etc !

Thank you for the submission, I hope to see more from you. Have a wonderful day !

-Ana
 
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