Hello Zipys & ArtemPlayes111,
Unfortunately, I will be Rejecting your map.
The theme isn't really clear, and the build isn't great. Try to pick a theme and have one or two main builds reflecting it, then build the parkour into those, rather than having a lot of floating parkour, as this will make your map more attractive to look at.
You have a few different jump styles which is good, but the parkour does feel quite repetitive. Try to experiment with a larger variety of blocks and items, as well as the way you utilize these, as this will make your map a lot more fun to complete.
The length and difficulty are good for a medium map.
Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.