Rejected Parkour Submission: The Cave

[MassiveClam]

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The main builders username is " MassiveClam " there was an assistant builder, who's username is " The_LavaKing "

The name of the map is " The Cave "

The warp is " /Plot V MassiveClam "

The difficulty in my opinion is easy but could be higher.

A total of 27 jumps. ( I know that does not sound like a lot. )

 

[IPattyI]

Hey MassiveClam,

Unfortunately, I will be REJECTING this map submission.

• Theme: As we have an overabundance of mine/cave/cavern-related maps currently on our server, this is a very unoriginally themed map submission. I recommend that you look at our list of previously used maps/themes as to prevent such things: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lZKQZMgGev6fXyhZ8nCPkTzNIj0yOjXjUTDvfzKNzl4/edit .
• Build: The build is not very good due to its unoriginal nature, blocky exterior, bland/empty interior. We have a bunch of mine/cave maps already, and each of them does something different. But, this one doesn't do anything different, it's just your run-of-the-mill mine build. And, it's not greatly executed either. The outside is not pleasing to the eyes, it's just a big box. The interior is just parkour with no usage of all of the space and is just surrounded by ore walls. It's just not very attractive overall.
• Parkour: The parkour was long enough and easy enough for the easy difficulty. But, I found it to be very unenjoyable to do as you utilized the same jumps over and over again (which is only worsened by the short amount of jumps since it's an easy map). The majority of your map was stone jumps with safety vines on them, that's not fun to do. You have a wide array of possible jump/block variations you can use, don't stick to the same things.

I hope you take these criticisms into consideration when submitting maps in the future, good luck!