Rejected Passage - Medium

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Map: Passage
~60 Jumps
3 Checkpoints
Difficulty: Intermediate
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I took what you said into consideration this morning and decided to make an entirely new build! I hope this one is better and meets all the requirements. Thank you!
 

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Hello OctopusOCD,

I regret to inform you that your map is REJECTED.

The THEME of your map is original as we don't have any maps based around the Grim Reaper, so good job on that!

The BUILD of your map is a ok. While the main build looks ok, its distracted by a lot of floating objects/parkour that creates a messy feeling. For the main build itself, try to add more depth and dimension to it.

The PARKOUR fits the length and difficulty of a medium map, so good job on that! Your parkour has some variance, but most of it is in clumps causing it to still be repetitive. To add more variance, try adding more jumps with unique blocks like pots, water, heads, vines, etc.

Thank you for taking the time to create a map, I hope to see more submissions from you in the future.
If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me on discord at Elly#5555
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