Hey RatchetEm,
I am sorry to say but I am going to be rejecting your map submission
The main reason being, is there no real theme to your map (Apart from the pastel), but it just looks like most of the rainbow maps we have on the server, as for the jumps they're just floating instead of being built in to some sort of structure. Some jumps are not need in the map too, such as the slime block you can just jump straight over.
However thank you for submitting a map, I hope to see more in the future!
- Aloro/Toby