Hey,
I am sorry to say but I am going to be rejecting this map!
I like your attempt in theme, however it has been done before (one of them by me;)). It does not outshine any of the others, to me it looks like pixel art with a box attached to it. I like some of the jumps however I feel like they are slightly too hard and repetitive.
Thank you for the map submission, I hope to see more in the future!