Rejected PencilPK- Easy

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PengPanda69

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Created by pengpanda and legacyxeno



Parkour name- PencilPK
Difficulty- Easy
Plot owner- pengpanda
Jumps- roughly 50
 

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Heya,

Unfortunately, your map is being REJECTED.
This theme is unoriginal as we already have similar maps (Writingutensils , pencilcase ). Be sure to check out our current themes before submitting a map.

The build itself lacks texture and depth and there is quite a bit of floating parkour which causes the map to look messy. Shape the build more and add more texture for detail.

The parkour fits the difficulty for the most part; however, the parkour is too long. An easy map should be between 20-40 jumps. Sadly, the parkour does lack variation. Use more blocks such as panes, fences, heads, cocoa beans, daylight sensors, water, etc. to space out your variation and make the parkour less repetitive.

We hope to see more maps from you in the future.
Have a good day/night
-Hayley
 
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