Rejected Perky Penguin Parkour - Medium

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Map Name: Perky Penguin Parkour
Creator: HakesPlace7
Difficulty: Medium
Jumps: 52
Checkpoints: 3
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Hey HakesPlace7! Unfortunately, your map is being rejected. Here's why;

The theme is an issue; it's unoriginal. We already have a fair few penguin themed maps on the server (NootNoot, Gunter). When you make a map, be sure to choose a unique theme! A list of all previously used themes can be found here!

The build is alright, as it is attractive, but could definitely be a little bit bigger and more detailed, as it feels very basic and plan at the moment. Otherwise, it is done well.

The parkour is the main issue; it feels too easy for a medium. Whilst the jump total was in the medium range, it felt much shorter than the majority of mediums on the server and ultimately fell short of the kind of parkour we want for a medium. It also did not have enough variation, as you've only really used basic blocks and some ladders. When you make a map, be sure to vary your jump types and block usage (e.g slimes, fences, etc)!

Good luck on your future submissions! [Lofi]
If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me on discord at Elly#5555
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