Hello WolfAndRyan,
I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is original, well done.
The build is accurate to what you were going for, well done overall.
The parkour has several issues. You cannot have parkour that is more than 35 blocks below your starting platform, and the first part of your map is below this threshold. In addition to that, the parkour throughout the map is very confusing and overall too hard for the expert difficulty.
Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!