Rejected Poisonous frog - Medium

[Wont_]

Username: Wont_
Map name: Poisonous frog
Plot tp: /plot visit Wont_ 1
Difficulty: (short) Medium
Number of jumps: about 37

 

[k_rissy]

Hello Wont_,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme of your map is unoriginal, as we already have maps based around frogs (SingingFrogs). Before creating a parkour please make sure to check out this template here to see all the maps accepted on the server!
The build of your map is a problem. There's some good detail and texture; however, there's also a lot of floating parkour/builds which takes away from the build itself. Try to build one main island with a main build so that the pathing can be around the build.
The parkour fits the length and difficulty of an easy map, apart from the last fence jump as it is at the end of a checkpoint. Your parkour is lacking variance, only things that are incorporated are regular jumps, fence, slimes and vines. To add more variance, try adding more jumps with unique blocks like pots, water, heads, vines, etc. Also be sure to make sure that all jumps are possible in 1.8.9 - the cocoa bean to vine jump isn't possible in 1.8.9.[Hayley]

Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!