Rejected PokeBalls| Easy/Medium

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Pretty sure theme is taken, and jumps aren't varied. Vary your parkour by adding blocks with different hitboxes to the parkour to make it flow!
 

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Hello SilverWhiffy,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme of your map is unoriginal as we already have many maps based around Pokemon (PokemonArt, Pokemon, Pikachu). Before creating a parkour please make sure to check out this template here (https://manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/) to see all the maps accepted on the server!
As far as the build goes, the pokeballs are accurate for what you are going for, so good job on that! The actual pokemon are very plain and boxy, try making them bigger in order to add the necessary detail. Next time try considering making one main build with lots of detail!
The parkour of your build fits the length and difficulty of an easy map so good job on that! The parkour is mostly floating, which isn’t accepted anymore, try incorporating your parkour into the build. Your parkour is lacking variance, only things that are incorporated are regular jumps and ladders. To add more variance, try adding more jumps with unique blocks like pots, water, heads, vines, etc.[Elly]
 
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