Rejected Pot Of Gold - Medium.

[MoneyMiser]

Username: MoneyMiser

Map name: Pot Of Gold.

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Plot: /Plot Visit MoneyMiser 1.

Difficulty: Medium

Number Of Jumps: 46

Checkpoints: 4

Testers: 3

About The Map: I love money, which is why my name is, MoneyMiser and I chose this map because of my love for money. This is a pot of gold, overflowing with lots and lots of loot that pirates want. I really hope you all enjoy my map! :)

 

[Blausein]

i like your build howewer id like it if youd build a rainbow that has the end at the pot of gold like the saying

 

[JakeNoot]

I personally don't think the build is very attractive, as the pot itself seems somewhat wrongly-formed and the block choice is awkward. Along with this, some of the parts of the build are confusing, I don't see why you had to add the weird gold rod-like things for the first few jumps (I may just not be realizing what they are). As for the parkour, it seems mostly pretty good, however it could use more variety. As well as this, the barrier blocks are very annoying throughout the map- a lot of the time I didn't know they were there and ultimately that caused me to miss some jumps. I'm giving this map a -1.

 

[MoneyMiser]

Hi Jake! Thank you for your opinion. Just wanted to let you know that the Pot Of Gold is overflowing which is what the beginning part is. Its a bunch of gold coming out. Yeah, I tried to keep it varied. However, it was difficult with the theme. If the pot looks formed wrong, its because flowing. I added some decoration to the pot, which is what the spots are. I did not want the build to look 'plain'. The barrier blocks are to avoid exploits, so sorry about that too. I may make some edits to the build (since that seems to be the big issue) but this is all related to the theme, which is something I cant really fix. (I had to redo this already a couple days ago). Thank you! I'll try to work on that. :)

 

[MoneyMiser]

Alright, I cleaned up the map. I added some netherrack stairs and slabs to make the shape of the Pot more round. The Pot may not look the best but I tried to shape it better (mainly on the noticeable parts like the sides and the front of the pot). I also decided to add a rainbow so the theme would not look plain or boring. I removed the parkour on the bottom of the pot because it was one of the causes of the pot being weirdly shaped on the bottom. I replaced the bottom parkour with parkour inside of the Rainbow. The block variety or the shape of the build may not look good, but my goal was to have an original theme, and good parkour that fits the length of the Medium difficulty that is not repetitive.

 

[MoneyMiser]

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[Aloro]

Hey Money, I am sorry to say but I will be rejecting this map submission.
Even though you did use a variety of jumps, I feel like the build is for one too simple. Not only this but we already have a Pot of Gold map on parkour. I believe if you were to really clean up on this map and really improve onto the build then it would be just fine.

Thanks for the map submission, hope to see more in the future!