Hello Llighty,
Unfortunately, I will be Rejecting your map.
The theme is original, however the build isn't very good. It's quite difficult to tell what it is, and does look a bit messy. I would suggest trying to add a bit more shape and definition to it, to try and make it easier to understand.
The parkour is really good. You used a wide variety of blocks and items in the jumps, and there is little to no repetitiveness throughout the map, so well done!
The length and difficulty are good for an easy map.
Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.